By Max

Gig Harbor High School, Gig Harbor, Washington
“This is the one,” I thought. The boat’s engine roared, and the line went taut. Then I flew forward, gliding over the water.
Gig Harbor, Washington, was perfect in mid-July. The bright summer sun glistened off the Puget Sound, the warm, salty air clung to my skin, and the patches of white roses along my grandparents’ yard were still in bloom. Their house was right on the shore of Fox Island and had a lovely view of the water. My family and I visited them frequently; jumping off the dock and paddleboarding through the shimmering waves were some of my favorite activities. During the summer after eighth grade, my parents left on a vacation, and I spent a week at my grandparents’ house. For years, I had wanted to learn how to wakeboard, and my grandfather promised to teach me. Learning how to wakeboard is a skill that most seem to pick up quickly. Unfortunately, I did not.
The days slid by during my weeklong stay. I walked the beach in search of crabs and ate lunch out on the bulkhead. I was always gazing at the choppy water, the strong afternoon breeze kicking up spray. The perfect conditions for wakeboarding failed to appear. I woke up early one morning and shuffled to a living room window that overlooked the sound. I stared in awe. The water was as smooth as glass. After some begging and negotiation, I was in the boat with my grandfather, shimmying into a wetsuit. I slipped my feet into the wakeboard bindings and pulled the laces tight. After gathering my balance, I flopped into the frigid water.
“Say when,” my grandpa called.
“Hit it,” I shouted back, and the boat leaped out of the water.
The rope went taut, I failed to lean back far enough, and I tumbled through the frothy water like a leaf caught in a storm. This process happened over and over, leaving my confidence shot. I called it quits for the day. The walk back to the house was one of disappointment. The salt stung my eyes, and water dripped off of my soaked wetsuit like tears, seeping into the wooden planks. My falls earlier that day ran through my head, like a song that somebody can’t forget.
That night, though, I wasn’t ready to give up. I researched technique, studied form, and watched professional demonstrations. This only fueled my excitement. The next morning, I was back in the water with a white-knuckle grip on the tow rope. On the next couple of pulls, I focused on the small steps. First, using the board as a wing, not a plow, and keeping my legs and arms bent. Finally, I was ready to stand.
This is it. The moment I’ve been practicing for. I watched the boat pull away, churning up the water. Then I was off. I stayed tight to the board, salty foam spraying into my eyes. In an instant, I was out of the water and gliding upon its surface. I was ecstatic. The bright sun overhead, the wind rushing through my hair, and the board, stable beneath my feet. It was a feeling that I cannot describe.
What makes the United States special is that opportunities for growth, learning, and resilience are abundant. However, these opportunities also test character and will reveal individuals’ true colors. Being an American means that one will never give up, even when trying again feels impossible. My moment on the water showed me that perseverance and determination are key to achieving success. Had I not tried over and over again, I would never have reached my goal.
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